Sunday, July 27, 2014

Eclipse Hunter v4c4 Tears, Aside from Smiles

(Republished because I've made some revisions)
Orange text means that my translation may not be accurate. Please comment if you find any mistakes ^^
After reading Odd Squad's version of v4c4, I've discovered several mistranslations. I've added some footnotes at the very end about these mistranslations.


學習IV微笑之外,還有流淚
Study IV Tears, aside from smiles

玄日走出了玩具店,因爲模型不可能當天完成,他拿不到東西,所以仍舊不快樂。
Dark Sun left the toy store. Because there was no way his model would be completed that very day, he couldn’t obtain anything, so he continued to be unhappy.

在芯片的判斷下,他走進和伊薩特來過幾次的烤肉店,這時時間已近八點鍾,該吃晚餐的吃完了,要吃宵夜的還沒開桌,所以,店內並沒有多少人。
Following the microchip’s suggestion, he walked into the barbecue restaurant he and Ezart had gone to several times. At this time, it was already 8 o’clock, so those who had been eating dinner had already finished, and those who wanted to eat midnight snacks hadn’t sat down yet. As a result, there weren’t very many people in the restaurant.

他坐了下來,對前來點菜的店員,簡單說了句:“全部都來一份。”
Sitting down, he said simply to the waiter who’d come to take his order, “Give me a portion of everything.”

“我們店的菜份量很多。”店員既驚訝又好心地提醒。
“The portions at this restaurant are very large,” the surprised waiter reminded him kindly.

“都來一份。”玄日語調平坦地重複了一次。
“A portion of everything,” Dark Sun repeated evenly.

Eclipse Hunter v4c5 Willfulness, Aside from Servility

(Republished because I made a few corrections)
Orange text means that my translation may not be accurate. Please comment if you find any mistakes ^^
Thanks to Lilyttse for catching a typo.



學習 V 服務之外,還有任性
Study V Willfulness, aside from servility

隔天上學時,日向夜依舊沒有等到伊薩特,但他並沒有難過,因爲他已經從安特契哪裏知道,這一切都是哥哥的安排,他派人通知了艾爾利安三人和伊薩特,不管如何,都不要理會日向夜。
The next day, when it was time for school, Daren still did not see Ezart waiting for him, but he wasn’t sad at all. He already knew from Avery that all this had been arranged by Gege. Gege had sent people to contact Elian’s trio and Ezart, telling them to ignore Daren no matter what happened.

而這一切都是爲了讓他生氣,好把‘阿夜’從玄日後頭逼出來。
And all of this was to make him angry in order to force “Dar” out from behind Dark Sun.

這讓日向夜今天即使沒有等到伊薩特,心情還是好得要飛起來了。
This caused Daren to be in such a good mood today that he felt like flying, even though Ezart hadn’t been waiting for him.

“好!今天就飛去學校吧!”日向夜精神奕奕地大叫。
“All right! Today I’m going to fly to school!” Daren exclaimed vivaciously.